Showing posts with label diction. Show all posts
Showing posts with label diction. Show all posts

Sunday, August 8, 2010

AND IN THIS CORNER, REPRESENTING THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE....

As its title suggests, Tom Stoppard's 1982 play The Real Thing concerns that which is authentic or true, that which is mere semblance or illusion, and the gray area in between. (If you've seen the film Shakespeare in Love, which Stoppard wrote with Marc Norman, you'll already have witnessed his obsession with the tension between art/artifice and reality; it merges playfully throughout the movie, from the gender-switching heroine all the way to the question of whether Christopher Marlowe really conceived Shakespeare's plays.)

As writers long before Stoppard have recognized (I'm thinking of George Orwell here, but there are myriads of examples), language can be force for both truth and falsehood, so it's not surprising that The Real Thing speaks directly on that theme, as well as expressing it indirectly through a series of literary tricks, deceptions, and double entendres. At one point Henry, the playwright protagonist, says the following about Brodie, a anti-nuclear protester:

He's a lout with language....Words don't deserve that kind of malarkey. They're innocent, neutral, precise, standing for this, describing that, meaning the other, so if you look after them you can build bridges across incomprehension and chaos. But when they get their corners knocked off, they're no good anymore, and Brodie knocks their corners off. I don't think writers are sacred, but words are. They deserve respect. If you get the right ones in the right order, you can nudge the world a little or make a poem which children will speak for you when you're dead.
So much of that passage resonates for me (and all of it, of course, is beautifully written). I particularly love the image of words getting their "corners knocked off," and the insistence that their precise use is not mere pedantry but rather a way of building "bridges across incomprehension and chaos." It's a worthwhile reminder that as writers, the power of our work necessarily rests on the precision and power with which we use words, and language generally. It's tempting to be careless with our word choice or unconscious about our diction. But great writers don't work that way. They use words as precisely as, say, Mozart uses musical notes: so that each and every one rings true.

Click here for an nice interview from the British Guardian in which Stoppard discusses this and other issues.

Friday, May 21, 2010

FUNCTIONING AUTHOR MARVELS: the perils and pleasures of word choice



It's not every day registering a domain name makes you laugh so forcefully you nearly snort Perrier out your nose, but I had that pleasure recently when I went to buy the domains associated with this blog.

I had figured that "workingwriterwonders" was weird enough that it wouldn't be taken, and I was right. Nevertheless, the computer at the site wanted me to have every possible option, so it made some suggestions of its own.

EffortWriterAmazes. BestWriterOnline. (If only.) JudyWriterOnline. DriverWritingOnline. My own personal favorite, FunctioningAuthorAmazes. (I couldn't use that one even if I wanted to; I'm often working, but to claim that I'm actually functioning is a stretch.) WorkingAtHome Forever: a premium name, the site said, that would cost me a cool $477 for a year.

Then there were the shorter suggestions: FunctioningWriter, WondersAuthor, WorkingAnimals, WorkingAway, EffortAuthor, WorkingHen (another $477 choice, though I discovered I could get WorkingChicken for only twelve bucks), and FunctioningAmazes. Well, indeed it does.

Samuel Clemens famously noted that "the difference between the right word and the almost right word is the difference between lightning and a lightning bug." I like to think he'd be amused at this illustration of his precept, even if it's just a computer with a bug providing it.

As for me, I'm going to save up my pennies until I have twelve bucks...not easy for those of us who are WorkingAtHomeForever. Because I can totally see myself writing a Working Chicken blog.